"The ocean is like a blanket of blue;
It covers the sand and all the fish too.
It keeps them warm and protected each day,
And at night, it gives them a place to stay.
The ocean is like a great lion roaring;
It bellows and growls when it is storming.
It extends its claws restlessly upon the shore,
As if it is trying to stretch out even more.
The ocean is like an orchestra of strings;
It plays its night music so beautifully.
Sometimes, though, the salty wind joins in,
And the tune they create together seems heaven-sent.
When I look into the blue eyes of the ocean,
When I listen to the song it sings,
I have heard music composed by my Creator;
And, perhaps, a subtle message, meant only for me."
©whatdoyaexpect.blogspot.com
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~Rayray
NOTE: Please don't steal my poems/stories (like the one above). Besides the fact that it's illegal, it's just not cool. If you would like to quote anything I write, please ask me first. Thank you and goodnight.
7 comments:
Love it. Love you.
Mademoiselle Rachel, you have talent, oh, so very much! Vous êtes un poète merveilleux. Vous souder ensemble les mots comme un forgeron soudures une épée!
-Willie Wooooh
That's a wonderful poem!
-Sylvi!-
Thank you, Sylvi! You're so sweet:)
Wow, Rachel! That's an absolutely beautiful poem! You have amazing talent, girl. :D It really is incredible - very descriptive and inspiring. (Hey, my brother is sitting next to me, and he said even he likes it. :) Haha.)
God bless!!
Thanks, Nicole! And thanks, Nicole's brother! :D
Hi Rachel!
I found my way here from Nancy Rue's blog... I really liked your poem :) My favourite line is the last two - so beautiful! :) It's so precious how you've looked at creation as a gift just to us from God... which it is!
Love.
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